What in the world happened to the text wrapping around an image in the Washington Examiner on Dec. 5, 2023? The first three lines in the left column seem to be the completion of a sentence. But the next paragraph starts with “In,” which possibly should be followed by a date, but there isn’t one in either column. The incoherent words aren’t simply continued from the left column to the right column; “MCPS launched … was a paradox”? And “was a paradox” doesn’t combine with any other words to make a sensible phrase. More words seem to be missing too. In the right column, “gain” between “Marylanders” and “their freedom” would make sense, but neither “gain” nor any other suitable verb is present; “paradox: slaver who the slave trade” should have “a” before “paradox” and some verb (“abetted”?) after “who.”
Where are the missing words? Behind the picture? In decades of layout work in addition to editing, I used PageMaker, QuarkXpress, and InDesign, but I don’t know how someone managed to create this mess. Words seem to be missing from some lines only.
Whether you are editing or laying out pages or both, the lesson here is to examine the final proof. I still recall looking at page proofs with a few other publishing professionals many years ago, and we were dazzled by an illustration the artist had created for an article. Oooh … Aah … Uh-oh! Fortunately somebody noticed that the headline was missing.
Visually, that’s a nice text wrap around the picture in the Examiner. But it’s important to read the results.